A bit dark and unsharp
What I see in most of your images is a tendency to Over Process. Pull back some. Many times Less is more. Like the Full Size View Best. Looks less Harsh.
agree with bjorn.. focus is off but it's still a nice image.
Prefer this one to your last one.
Darks could be lightened with shadow/highlights, selectively. When sharp images are reduced for Web they require re-sharpening. Took me time to learn this! My humble offering.
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