New process for this picture.
The first is hard, this is soft.
There you got it. Much better
That's the one...
9.9 superb Urban shot,
Much better indeed, great work!
Don't really care for these types of images (Urbex, each to his own) but your re-work really makes this one POP! Well Done. Perhaps You should Re-Work everything before Posting the Original. LOL.
This is to approach the work otherwise, the other was valid, but personally I prefer it, a very careful, to appreciate more details.
Not a total Wow from me but.. compared to the other... WOW. This is the one that pops from the two.
Du bel urbex!
I like more this version
I bet this would look great in black and white too.
i agree with john