Street Waikiki Hawaii II improved virsion.

Picture by fredzhang


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  • April 30, 2013
  • Nikon D300
  • NIKON 18-200MM VR
  • Shooting Style Hand Held
  • Shoots Number Multiple Exposure
  • Exposures Number -2,-1,0,+1,+2
  • Editing Software Photomatix Pro
  • File Format RAW
  • Notes

16 Comments

30 Apr 16:24
fredzhang

Tks a lot Leo and Darrellburnett to point out the problem Thank you all have given me vote. I wish you can change your work more easy rather than delete and post it again when there is some problem or area needs to be change or improve.

30 Apr 17:00
sanz3jo

10

30 Apr 18:11
karl_oparka

9

30 Apr 18:20
_banned_user_

A great candid photo! I do think a slightly tighter crop would improve the overall image (see note). Fantastic exposure and processing.

30 Apr 18:36
bessi7

9

30 Apr 18:40
alban1

+

30 Apr 18:48
inkslinger

Another 10 Fred, agree about the crop....

30 Apr 19:00
arnie58

10

30 Apr 19:31
pandarino

all ok

30 Apr 20:34
fredzhang

Thanks and respect a lot about the comments about crop. However I think my composition is perfect accord to the one third rule. And thanks Leo again!

30 Apr 20:52
digicam

Crop or No Crop......Still a Full Score IMHO. Crop would only make it an 11.

30 Apr 21:07
rcuello

rc

30 Apr 22:42
darrellburnett

Really nice version, and the work done around the photograph makes a huge diffeernce. I actually respectfully disagree with the cropping comments; both the photographer and the couple are both placed on 'rule of thirds' intersections, not the bee all and

30 Apr 22:44
darrellburnett

.... end all I'll admit, but I think it works REALLY nicely as a scene, if not as a formal wedding photograph. Excellent work! 10+! PS I meant "Photographer" in the first bit.

30 Apr 23:11
josephc

9

01 May 20:30
rrr

rrr

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